I'll Make U Proud...

My faults always noticed...
My mistakes always corrected...
My failures always handled...
U'll always be respected...

A hand of calmness...
In rough sunlight...
A ray of hope...
In dark gloomy night...
Helped me to face the world...
With all my might...
Dear dad...because of you...
Today I shine bright..

Be it more money...
Before month end...
Or the latest fashion...
That was in trend...
Or the expenditure...
On my lady friend...
You dealth with them all...
Without slightest descend...

My failures immense...
My achievements less renowned...
I am not different...
A simple part of the crowd...
But with all my heart...
I shout it out loud...
That despite all difficulties...
Dad... one day i'll make u proud...

Comments

  1. GREAT!!!!
    HATS OFF........
    I'm confused.........i'm nt having a single word 2 praise this one......... seriously......
    Great was the only word that came in my mind as soon as i read it.....after that i thought for 28 minutes....wat 2 cmnt wat 2 cmnt.......still came out with nothing..........My dictionary-i think it is obsolete now..........

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  2. @bhan - thank u soo much brother...

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  3. this is a lovely composition.
    Keep it up Mr.Poet :)
    God bless you :)

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  4. very well written or i can say its simply Perfect!!!!!
    Keep it up....:):)

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  5. Simply Beautiful...like it..:) :)

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